Its really nice, i especially like how the character has a thick line for a shadow :)

Smoking kills,but so do hunting rifles.

First off the maturity rating is too low. It's at least a T rating due to use of tobacco.

I liked how you detailed the skull and how she's tipping over to her back.
This is a nice picture. I don't know what else to say about this.

I like how exaggerated the puffiness of the jacket looks.

As they say in Nevada, smokin is a sign of death, so watch yer ass!