This piece has a few flaws in it, it could've had better transitions, blah blah blah. The cilmax of this song (a brief key change) is worth the imperfections in the earlier parts. I'm aware this song isn't perfect, but it was something I just sat down and began writing. I hope this piece of music conveys something, I hope you can get something out of it. There's quite a bit of emotion buried in the surprisingly simple melody and chords, you just have to be willing to feel it. What memories does this piece bring back?
Ok that was really deep. Basically, I wanted to write a reflective, lighthearted song; it turned into a very bittersweet song instead. I hope you enjoy it
EDIT: Since this was frontpaged (wow!), here's a brief description of me: I'm a 16-year-old guy who's been composing for about a year and a half with a fair set of sample libraries. I play French horn and sing in the choir at my school. I also have a set of bells that I play sometime, and I'm hopefully getting a guitar soon.
Awesome writing! I like how it almost tells a story with varied emotional parts. It is definitely bittersweet at parts, but also has joyful moments like 1:27. Then a brief moment of uncertainty around 1:53 before resolving itself at 2:08.
As for your transitions, I think they fit quite well. Also keep in mind that no song is perfect, so don't beat yourself up over it. Your talent and hard work shows. :)
You're spot on with that first bit- this piece quite literally tells an actual story. I actually rushed through this song a little bit because it was a little emotional and I wanted to see what ending would be most fitting. Glad you liked this composition, thanks for reviewing!
I'm uploading a new piece soon that uses the main musical theme of this piece, so make sure to check it out as well!
I like it.
Not bad
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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