Here is a trailer we are working on. Are there any improvements writing wise, timing, you think would create a better impact? Thank you in advance for your time!
Apologies if not best forum for this.
well it was graphic as most animie are, yet I have been considering something more like a starwars program full of clone men who cannot aquire a girlfriend.. so why not write a story where anime girls married all the storm troppers??
James 4:6 6But he gives us more grace. That is why Scripture says: "God opposes the proud but shows favor to the humble."
At 5/27/17 11:37 AM, Xzuber8 wrote: well it was graphic as most animie are, yet I have been considering something more like a starwars program full of clone men who cannot aquire a girlfriend.. so why not write a story where anime girls married all the storm troppers??
There is an interesting story concept in there, nice!
also you text captions on the bottom move a little "too" fast... I couldn't read the story casue the words disappeared before I could read them...
James 4:6 6But he gives us more grace. That is why Scripture says: "God opposes the proud but shows favor to the humble."
At 5/28/17 12:06 PM, Xzuber8 wrote: also you text captions on the bottom move a little "too" fast... I couldn't read the story casue the words disappeared before I could read them...
Fantastic point! Thank you very much for that.
