Still working on Lilith from Diablo for a friend. I don't know anything about the game so hopefully, my friend likes it. I didn't like the line work of the first one so I tried it again.
Sketches and line art for the Alice drawing. I might redo it since I'm not liking it.
Sketches. A bit of an anatomy test to see what I remember. I might need to review the whole arm again.
Sketches and painting. I tried to paint from imagination. I don't remember much of it so I'll practice once I do some clothing studies and arm anatomy review.
I participated in design challenge 13 by PilotSpikey. Apparently, Scoops was removed from the throne by PilotSpikey. Anyways I took my avatar's hands and made this offering.
At 4/1/23 01:04 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: Sketches and painting. I tried to paint from imagination. I don't remember much of it so I'll practice once I do some clothing studies and arm anatomy review.
that is a cool sphere (INSERT THUMBS UP)
I tried to test myself again to see what I remembered from practicing anatomy. I seem to have forgotten some muscles from the scapula(shoulder blade). It looks like I have to add more to my studies. Anyways, the other stuff are sketches.
Finally finished this one.
Some practice and updated my OC Kai's design.
It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.
At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.
hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!
At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
i'll have it done by tomorrow (cuz its 1am and i need sleep rigth now).
At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
the drawing is done. i hope you like it.
give some critisicim if its possible :)
At 4/8/23 05:46 AM, Nebulate wrote:At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:the drawing is done. i hope you like it.At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
give some critisicim if its possible :)
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nebulate/alice-in-a-inferno
This is Awesome! Thank you so much!
You've improved a bunch since you last drew Alice. For the critique, I'll look at it closer a little later today.
At 4/8/23 12:48 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:At 4/8/23 05:46 AM, Nebulate wrote:This is Awesome! Thank you so much!At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:the drawing is done. i hope you like it.At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
give some critisicim if its possible :)
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nebulate/alice-in-a-inferno
You've improved a bunch since you last drew Alice. For the critique, I'll look at it closer a little later today.
im happy you enjoyed the drawing. its always nice to see that my stuff make people happy.
At 4/8/23 05:46 AM, Nebulate wrote:At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:the drawing is done. i hope you like it.At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
give some critisicim if its possible :)
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nebulate/alice-in-a-inferno
I love how you drew Alice. Here's some critique ya asked for.
You did a good job on here expressions and coloring. Something you could improve on is the neck. I noticed that you made the neck at the top a little too thin. I added a bit more volume at the top of the neck and on the sides(in green).
You can see in the reference I attached that the neck is still pretty thick where the neck connects to the head.
At 4/8/23 05:46 AM, Nebulate wrote:At 4/7/23 07:09 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote:the drawing is done. i hope you like it.At 4/7/23 07:04 PM, Nebulate wrote:Sure! Go for it. I would love another Alice drawing!At 4/7/23 01:39 PM, BargonSpaceman wrote: It turns out Alice was pointing at her(I had to change the pose for the panel) OC alignment flip version of her, Eliza. This was for design challenge #5 hosted by Skoops. The rest are sketches.hey @BargonSpaceman i was wondering if i can draw alice again bc the other drawing was a shitpost and i want to redraw her.
give some critisicim if its possible :)
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nebulate/alice-in-a-inferno
Also, thinking about lighting and adding some shading can give the character some depth and feel more 3d. Keep the lighting simple. I decided to put a light pointed down in front of her face to keep it simple. You can add complexity over time once you understand 3d shapes better. I added a gif of the changes. (Hopefully the gif works)
Hopefully, this critique helps.
Thanks again for drawing her, you did a good job and have been improving.
