Its okay I guess
It's alright, but The plot was very loose.
Can you tell me what happened in the end? Did the lady see the body or was that scream because she was killed?
Overall, though I like gore.
Pretty interesting
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
This was originally for Halloween of last year but never got around to finish it. I decided to end it differently from what I had planned. It's my first animation that isn't based on other people's characters.
The intro is simple as I want people to focus on the movie itself.
I hope you enjoy it and I will be looking forward to any feedback, both positive and negative.
Enjoy :)
Edit 1 - I switched the loader to one with a play button so it doesn't loop.
Edit 2 - WOOO! My first award, a daily 3rd. I'm so happy. Thank you everyone for voting for me. :D
Edit 3 - I swear I must be dreaming.....FRONT PAGE!..OMGGGG..I'm bouncing up and down with excitement and joy and everything. WOW. THANK YOU NEWGROUNDS AND E VERYONE. If I didn't have a horrible sunburn right now I'd go out and celebrate. :D
Its okay I guess
It's alright, but The plot was very loose.
Can you tell me what happened in the end? Did the lady see the body or was that scream because she was killed?
Overall, though I like gore.
Pretty interesting
The animation is more mood driven than plot. What happened at the end is up to the viewer to decide. Many things could have happened. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks. :D
Confusing...
I'd give this a six out of ten. I can appreciate that you obviously put some effort into this, but it was rather hard for me to understand, hence the low rating. For your next animation, make the plot a bit easier to understand, either in the animation or the Author Comments. Sorry, again, for the low rating.
This animation wasn't exactly plot driven as it was more by mood. I'm glad you noticed the effort and sorry you didn't understand it. Next animation I do will definitely have more plot and easier to understand. Thanks for watching it and trying to enjoy it. :D
sorry famo
im really sorry to rate you low..... but i did not really enjoy it. really good idea.... maybe it wa just too short for me. as i did not understand what was going on, but hey maybe second one XD
That's totally fine, not everyone will like it or get it. There can always be a possibility for a second one but I don't know if I'd want to do it. Maybe you'll enjoy anything I make in the future. Glad you watched it and tried to enjoy it. :D
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
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its not scary! but funny hahaha, its like faceless people getting killed for painting
Glad you enjoyed it. :D lol They were faceless because I wanted it to be so that the painter takes away their identity when he paints them. :D