Fix the loop
~~REVIEW~~
Well i gave a decent score for the content and art style, it looked like it had a unique kinda texture especially on the boys head, the animation seemed to be really on the shortside, which was a bummer because you really have something here worth the while, and with abit more longer and more content and ofcourse no "LOOPING" it will be a much more pleasent experience
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well first off to really improve on this try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, now second you have a fantastic flash here but its too short so i suggest adding more scenes and or adding some new content give the story more depth, while still keeping the simple concept
~~OVERALL~~
nice art style could use some fixing though
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