Love the music, made me laugh. It reminded me of the improv / silly raps my friends used to make with me. As far as 24 hour game jams go, this is good stuff. You show an ability to prioritize the most important aspects of your game and you're okay with just having fun with quickly getting the other aspects together. That's a skill I lack, being a perfectionist.
I loved the bit in the song about the Unity gamedev kids gettin sloppy. It's true,and I'm guilty of it! Having the engine do so much for you lowers the barrier of entry, so less talented people can use it, and that amateur demographic becomes synonymous with the engine.
