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3000 Chapter 1: Alone and Lost (Remastered)

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rated 3.44 / 5 stars
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Action
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war
monsters
doomsday
3000

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Mar 19, 2017 | 9:48 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place March 21, 2017

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Author Comments

same as my first verison of 3000 chapter 1 only i fixed some audio and animation!

same credits as before

this is a pilot for a new animated series im trying to start up called 3000. its a more dramatic, serious and dark story about man kinds battle for survival after the end of the world

Christine voice of michelle : https://m.youtube.com/user/sheiks65

Scar voice of theif : https://youtu.be/QpBb0t7AlwY

music composer:https://youtu.be/nD3vNKwVnwE

Facebook page for marcprime9: https://www.facebook.com/CharlietheReaper/

Reviews


melkaticoxmelkaticox

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Sorry, I find it kinda funny how a fixed version of a previously uploaded video managed to maintain two typos found in the intro and credits.
The story is nothing original but I don't think it's trying to be. The writing is...actually pretty great, the old dude seems pretty humane instead of being the typical generic badass found in most post apocalyptic stories, which I appreciate. The girl is a girl, she hasn't had much screentime yet.

Then there's the visuals, which are sadly the worst part of this video. The perspective is a mess, the character designs are very weirdly proportioned, and even the lip flaps manage to look..."strange", which I didn't believe was possible. Giving each character a constant smile probably isn't the best idea.
My advice: Work on the character designs, mainly their proportions. The perspective is less important at the moment.
And please, fix the lip flaps. Neutral lips work better.


TFnemesis95 responds:

Thank you so much for the kind words of advice ill take them into consideration im glad you liked the first episode. Hope you have a great day my friend stay awesome!


OblitusCSOblitusCS

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Cool animation dude! Loved the serious tone. Of course there is room for improvement but you seem very passionate about the project so I wouldn't worry about it, you'll get there!
Keep it up!


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TFnemesis95 responds:

I appercaite it man! I know the audio is shit but have to start somewhere:) i appercaite the review thank you


nickninonicknino

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well it's not bad. That's for sure. As far as story goes it's cliche sure, but this has potential on its own. It's a well executed cliche. The hero seems like a cookie cutter macho older badass type. Learn a little thing called character development, its everything friend. On the tech side of things, fix your audio first. A old friend once told me "a audience will walk out of a movie with bad sound much quicker than a movie with bad visuals. Your shots, are pretty interesting though, that's definitely the strength here.

Keep up the good work, and thanks for the art!


TFnemesis95 responds:

Thank you


ColorflowerColorflower

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great.


TFnemesis95 responds:

Thank you! :)