It's strange, but I like it - piecing together the story is really sad but heartwarming at the same time.
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...I was hoping to release this after I published a personal project, but that didn't pan out, so here you go...
This is one half of a school project I did with a partner. We both made separate stories using Twine and combined them into one file. This is an edited version of my half of the project; I cleaned up (hopefully all of) the spelling errors.
This interactive story is less awkward than "Minds are Dumb, People are Smart" but that doesn't say much. In it, you play someone who travels across time to explore various points of his life in order to solve the mystery of whatever the heck is going on in unknown place. It's inspired by "Slaughterhouse-Five" by Kurt Vonnegut and "Moonlight" by Jonas Kyratzes, I hope you like it!
The flow of the story is somewhat incoherent and I don't enjoy it because I am a woman.
tried to open on several browsers and none of them seem to load your game sorry but could you do anything about this? seems im not even the only one to have this problem either...
I can't seem to find the game.
Sorry, but the story and the end is kinda..... stupid.
Beautiful idea but I would have carried it out differently.