Sharp-sheet!

Very nice indeed

And this one was very well done and for being your first one with voice and dialog it's almost perfect the voices are very good and it all made for a nice animation flowed very well all through the animation a nice animation indeed and I was very impressed with all of this so very good work and hope to see more soon but that will be the end of this review untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a thing it was fantastic all the way through

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lol

Haha, weird bro. Did I spell weird right?

Nice job dude! The ending made me laugh and everything was very well paced and fluid. Keep it up!