interesting short madness movie, with some nice action/duel scenes in it, nice shooting/fighting, and with some cool, unique character as the protagonist.
yet, the movie was a bit ''choppy'', and by that, i mean that perhaps, the FPS (frames per second, aka=its ''speed'' ) was slow. other than that, it was OK.
(perhaps, you could raise the FPS speed? maybe to 20 FPS/ 30 FPS? im sure that this would imprive the problem. otherwise, experiment with diferrent speeds/FPS settings.)
also, it looped.
loops are often not welcomed in here.
perhaps you could add a preloader? or a play/replay button?
it would be nice.
other than that, good movie, and a promising start.
keep it up, man!