Very colorful :D
Good job kiddo!

Well done making your first game! I like the vibrant colours and straightforward theme - easy to pick up and play. I hope you had fun doing it. Maybe for your next project (I'm assuming you've got the game dev bug now!) think about adding the following:

1) a start screen showing the game title, with some simple instructions and a results screen so players know how well they've done - you can use new layouts in Construct to achieve this.

2) a score system - for example in this game you could have a timer - the faster you find the 3 castles the higher the score. That way players have an incentive to replay the game so they can try and beat their best time.

3) some sound effects - you can record these yourself using a microphone (it's fun doing it this way - I do it a lot! :)) or use a tool like "sfxr" which allows you to generate lots of different sounds with just the click of a button. I'm sure your parents will help you find this on the internet.

I look forward to seeing your future creations!

Hey, you did nice for your first game! Hope I can see you developing more in the future, and I'm also happy for your parents being motivating you with this.

Congratulations :) and cheers from Brazil!

Nice game!

- works just fine as it is please add some more levels to it :),
- the artwork can be improved by desaturatinig the colors of the walls, make your player stand out even more!,
- give some instructions in your game, like a progressbar of how many castles are left,
- invision your game without any comments could you play it? or do you know what to do?

Try working on these fields. I am sure you can do even more than this!

Great game!