this stuff is good
I have to say that this is very artistically done. you have good style and plot. your bad guy has a great motive, and your fights are never really too long. I am sure you know this but I will say it anyway: Be very careful when doing a series alot of fighting. unless you are trying to target dimwits, this could get old very quick. However you wanna tone it down too much, otherwise it wont live up to expectaions and will get boring. you have done well far already, so I can assume that you have a good judgement of these things. Keep the good work!