Not bad...
To tell you the truth, I found this anim to be very boring. I wanted to watch it untill the end, but I just couldn't. It's the comicstyle you used, that made it so boring. I hope you'll use voice acting in ACT 3 because I found it very boring with only music looping troughout the whole flash. Although your story was great, as far as I followed trough the story..I got interested in what happend. Nice job. Consider my arguments? All in all, I'm giving you a 4/5. Because your drawings are beautiful and story.