Hahaha...
... that shit was funnie! :D
I really enjoyed the grapichs, it looked really good overall. There werent that much motion involved though, but who cares as long as u dont get irritated.
I liked the story, i found it quite amusing. But timing wasnt 100% in my eyes, things happened a liiiittle too slow. But timing is something very difficult too, but that might be something for ya to think about in ur next flash!
The coughing and soundeffects sounded kinda bad too, but i assume that werent ur main thing here. Do remember though that music/sound is a very important part of a film.
Buuut u probably already know that!
I hope this was some constructive feedback for ya, and feel free using my music in upcoming projects!! ;)
/Rucklo