ok then.
I'm just going to say this first off, because most people I know would (sadly) consider this. I'm a guy, but I'm not gay. as a writer of romance stories, I found this touching, especially since it's based on a true story (like you side minus the eevee part). The animation was just fine in my opinion, and the music you selected was a good match. now I didn't cry or anything, but I did enjoy watching this. some elements you could improve on... I guess that would have to be color the characters in and use more than a few colors. other than that, you did fine.