Reviews for Genocide Trailer

[SquareHog]

Italion Stallion / Willy Wonka, shut up.

GKG, you already know my thoughts on the trailer, and your work on episode 1 looks great.

As for you, IS/WW, for the love of god, please stop. You claim to be 16 in your profile, but you act like you're twelve. You succeed greatly in embarrasing yourself. GKG doesn't need this sort of crap! She's like my little sister, man. And the way you're treating her is really starting to bug me. If you have any decency whatsoever, you'll see that what you're doing isn't right, and that you are abusing the review system. It is your job to offer constructive criticism, not to insult the artist! You don't know anything about GKG, so why say anything? All you show is your own self-loathing and lack of any intelligence whatsoever. And also...don't the TOS state something about having more than one account? Hmm...

And before you attempt to put down my statement on the use of the review system, I have left criticism on this movie, and this also my way of pointing out how immature you really are. Grow up, stop speaking in 1337-speak, and stop insulting my friend. She deals with enough without your pathetic insults.

And btw, she's not fat, and YES, she has friends, which is more than I can say for you.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

You can kiss me now Kenny.....

Thanks *sniffle*

Ken, I am fat, but no obeise. Let's just make sure you are clear on that.

-GKG ( slightly gladened )

[Hyphron]

Graphic can be improved

Not that im saying hand drawn flashes are easy =)
But the story and concept is great with the exception of the introduction paragraph

What it is now:
The elves, an everlasting race, have survived up to now, when a council owns your body from the moment you are born, until your bones go back to the earth.

Maby be better?
The elves, an everlasting (if they're everlasting then why are they being exterminated? evelasting is usally a ending word like "everlasting peace from this moment on" and so on) race, have survived up to now. A council owns your body from the moment you are born, until your bones go back to the earth.

This is just a sugesstion since the "when" part didnt really make any sense. And no im not being a pain in the @$$ english teacher =)
or at least not trying to be ;-)

Cant wait for the voice actors to come in :D

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

Yay! Another response!! Hee hee. As I mentioned in the descripion, I was sick for like.... about 75% pf the development. Episode 1 should be coming out soon... but I need everyone to notice where my mouse decided to get all fubar and crap... Heh.

I maybe be getting a tablet soon, so expect MUCH better quality in episode 2. Wow. ^_^

Ok.... You must realise by now that I am an rp FANATIC. I have my own elvish language ( making it's first appearance as the main dialouge in episode 2. The elves are immortal... but they can be killed. I'll tell you a secret >.> <,<

Kade is trying to get his mother back, because she was killed by the former council, because she broke some rule or another about breeding with humans. Kade needs DNA from someone in her bloodline, or his. The extent of DNA he needs is so great, he must kill the person to get enough of it. ( His mother is the weird greyish robot in the tank. The tanks around him are cyborgs)

The voice actors I have set-up will most likely just blow you away. As I have probably mentioned, my brother ( who is kinda like Robin Williams in talent) Will be voicing for me. I may take over the Bishonen Kas in the later episodes... That may be the only guy being voice by me ( sry if this sounds weird to you ^_^ )

Heh. I type too much. But I am always happy to get new people reveiwing my work in a fair way. As always!!! Email me at [e-mail] with the subject "Voice acting" if you think you want a part in later episodes.

Until the next reveiw!
GKG

[Fraggles]

Very good.

I cant wait to see the real thing! Just one thing...I was reading the reviews...and I found one that you answered and you sucked when you were 11...you were insulting me....IM 11! Well...it's okay though.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

Heh. Well,I really don't think that 11 year olds suck... I hang out with 11 year olds... they are almost cooler than I am.

Ha ha, so how did you find this? It was "buried". I guess you looked up either trailers, or Genocide... THe mystery continues! ( thanks for the reveiw btw, I am happy to read new reveiws once in a blue moon ^_^)

I'm glad you ( and surprizingly alot of other people ) are anxious to see Genocide, episode one. THe graphics have improved. I am using movie clips ( the trailer has NONE. That's right. NONE.) to a very high extent. My style has changed dramaticaly, and I am less ashamed to show it to friends, so I get more help. I am also taking the advice of a very nice reveiwer, who suggested I take breaks in between shots. Some shots may suck right now... I am almost 88% completed. I am nearing the final month or so of production. Now all I need are un annoying sound effects ( very hard to find nowdays) and voice actors. My brother FLASHvic ( I suggest you check out his work ) will be voicing one of my main characters, Kade.

I need voice actors for episode two, so if anyone is interested, email me at [e-mail] Sayonara!

-GKG

[Paper-Man]

Hm

I hate trailers. Time spent on a trailer is time that could have been spent on the movie. That being said, this looks like it will be a good series. You have a wide range of characters here, and your action is good. I appreciate the effort of hand drawing everything, but even though your animation is smooth, the characters themselves look a little simple. Remember that Flash artists are allowed to be lazy - reuse the same heads and bodies for different scenes. Quality over quantity. Good luck with Genocide.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

It's sorta hard re-using the same angle of the head, for a different scene, with a totaly different angle.

If it updated correctly, you may be able to see the new model of the Heroine... Do you all really wanna hear the name yet? No. No you don't BWA HA HA HA!

Anyway.... I already have the first 10 seconds of animation up. I am just having trouble making a new model for the Cyborg commander. That model was not made to move. ( Red haired robot person with flames in the background)

I use a very simple style in this movie. I was nervous about the graphics. Surprizingly, this is a VERY graphics intensive movie, and when I first loaded it on my computer, it moved so slowly. Sadly, the music does not match up with the visuals as well. I do not know what the case is for better computers.

[kronous]

hmmmm

not bad my friend i know i havnt made any myself but you know i can still think whats good and bad cant i and that was pretty good

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

It was mo mostly an experiment anyway. I didn't actualy consider submitting this until fairly recently.