Cool
I enjoyed this one.
Cool
I enjoyed this one.
Even better than your last one!
That was very entertaining good job on this but pleese make more
5/5
s'ok
its ok better than the last but put more of a story in a single episode hopefully the 3rd will be better
Barely made it to a 7
Ok, the only thing that's any good about this flash, is the music, and the fool in the yellow hat being paranoid about the five-0. That got me cracking up. Cut those out, and this is a 3 at best. Make these more funny, and they will be much better.
haven't really gotten any laughs
---- Some parts in the story seem to be silly (in a bad way). I don't like the way that they're not treating Bumpy like a person at all. And the way the lawyer just comes up in the street and gives them the contract then and there.
--- Didn't make me laugh.
- The characters are a bit static when on-screen
++ I like the art for the characters
- Not so much art for buildings at start.
++ funky music
+++ Great font
- The voices could maybe be a bit more expressive - like when Orlando's saying he can't run the joint.
++ For the most part though, the lines are fairly well read. Great recording.
overall
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I put this on a par with some American sit-coms. I'm mildly curious to see where it goes, but haven't really gotten any laughs and don't expect any.