you kick ass
loved it man keep it up
you kick ass
loved it man keep it up
bitch stole my boat!
Awesome. Everything was great.
Awesome
I really don't have much to say but why guns?It would've been better without them.that is all
Relly good
Liked it alot!
A little short...
It was a little too short, but it was still very good. I liked the rain sound effects. You seem to keep adding things to your story that give it more depth and range. Keep doing these things because you're doing a great job so far!