Awesome! One thing though...
Dude! That was sweet! I liked how you did it, and the ending was pretty cool too. Just one thing. Your quote at the end is a bit off. It's not
"Strength comes in response to a need, not a desire."
it's actually,
"The Power comes in response to a need, not a desire. You need to create that need"
and trust me. Gohan's my favorite character, and all his tranformations rock. I know almost every line that has to deal with Gohan (damn I'm a nerd...lol) But great nonetheless!! I gave you a 9 overall! Keep up the good work.