Good stuff
^^Good Points^^
Another very good movie! The voice overs are definitely the best part in this movie, they are very clear and distinct for you characters. The musical choices you used gave this a ten for sound. I liked the drawigns a lot as well, some of the odd shapes you used for bodies were pretty humorous, and your graphics were consitently well drawn, shaded and animated. The storyline is funny and there are lots of points where I had a good laugh.
^^Needs Improving^^
Now that you mention it, the humor does seem a little too forced, it seems like the whole LAN party scene was too similar to the crappy humor found in Family Guy, where everything is very deliberate and sounds like the character is trying to be funny to the audience, which is not what cartoon humor should be.