Ahem.
Please check your spelling next time.
Ahem.
Please check your spelling next time.
jeje, sorry, I am not from USA or any country where people talk english, I talk spanish, that's the reason, but I'm improving my english
OOPS
There are WAY too many dialog mistakes, the storys gettin good tho.
I know I know ^^;
I wasn't so good actually at english, anyway now I have a friend that corrects my grammar errors :P
Decent
A pretty decent flash. next time, reread your script before you submit so that you can catch the gramatical errors you made, or have some one go over it
Well, thankyou but the problem is, I don´t know when I have a grammar error because I´m not from USA, I´m from other country where we don´t speak english.
omg this is such a knockoff
this is a knockoff of super mario brothers z. they have to collect the 7 gems, and itsl ike dbz, then sonics home world is destroyed. isuggest everyone watch super mario brothers z episode 4.
Well maybe it is like that :(
but if all becomes what I want, the story will turn in something diferent :)
lol you fuked up on the talking so many times
you seriously got remake this got remake this the talkin alone made the movie bad