Good
I liked it, it gave me inspiration for a song, im halfway done, 9!
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Definitly things missing that you didnt show which gave u a bad score.
why was she on the phone, why was he crying, how did the police know he had a gun, why did he end up risking his life by pulling out the gun......etc....
This flash didn't make a lot of sense...
The plot, however small and short it may have been, wasn't self-explanatory, as I think the author tried to make it. How would the police have known that the man had a weapon? Why was the woman arrested? This is full of holes, and needs a lot of work... Also, something else. The music needed to follow one constant tempo. The guitar messed up countless times. Record your music more than once. Chances are it's not gonna be exactly how you want it the first take.
Fan-F$*%in-Tastic
This is definitly one of the best submitted flashes. I loved the guitar playing through the whole thing, and it was just a overall great flash. Good music, good drawings, overall 10. I also liked how the last bullet just hapend to clip the dude right in the forehead.
awesome
this was very good first off..i enjoyed it a lot...but one thing i realized after watching it twice is...the hand that goes on her shoulder on the end...didnt have a ring on it at first...idk if that was an accident or if it actually means something..like...even though it was a bad situation...she met someone she would soon marry?..but she already had a ring on...so im guessing thats just her husband..i i dont know..it was most liklet an accident but that was awesome..great job