Build off it
Graphics were almost outstanding; a little more touchup work and you'll be great in no-time. Style was good, but too short; it needs to be longer if you desire a HIGHER score. Sound was about the same; microsoft sam is so old. Maybe if you decided to use your own voice with a mic or something. Violence was null, as was interactivity. I clicked the "Play this movie now" button. Humor was ok also; nice one liner. Hopefully you build a stronger storyline. Good luck!
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That was weird
that was odd and i didnt understand. how did that have anything at all to do with a tragic tale about a boy whos father was lost at sea. u shood make that longer and less confusing. im sure u can do bettr
You must look deeply into the story to understand its true context.
Too short
The animation was good, and at least you put humor to the few seconds of flash animation you did, but you should make it longer than that. You're a good animatior, but shoulnd't end so soon with the one line humor.
In this response I have only put one line of humor. Can you find it?
hello
that was kind of good
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a very strange Work of art. im 15... and i have diabetes... im not offended. in fact i laughed... but seriously... that sucked :P.
sorry to say it
Can I hug you?