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Reviews for "Life of Tween"

Short but sweet

Very nice, and wonderful change to all the "torture the computer generated character". This gave a refreshing change in perspective, which is much needed. So plot-line is wonderful. And tying in the music as a source of life, great metaphor! The animation, though not perfect, is still more than adequate for this flash, and the length of time of the flash was long enough to tell this story with emotion. The one thing I felt was out of place was when you actually got the character to speak that one line. Just a personal opinion, but it feels it would have been deeper if you kept the digital characters silent, and just let there actions speak for themselves. Overall Well done.

akoRn responds:

Interesting point of view. I'll try to make it better IF I make another like this. Ty for review

In my point of view!

Simple,Smart and good music.

Biggest flaw was that the plot was not as clear as should be.

akoRn responds:

Thank You. I respect ur opinion, but most other found the plot are fairly done.
Anyway, ty for reviewing. I'll take any criticize for me to learn from.

Awesome!

Better then anything I've done before...obviously...I kick your flash's score with a five! ^^,

Nice light comedic story

I thought that this had a nice charm to it and an answer to the decade old question about what our computers do when we are not looking at them. Good job

akoRn responds:

Thank you. Yea, that one of the thing leading me to make this movie. =]

yea...

if only our creations form the first fram did all the work... haha nice job

akoRn responds:

LOL. thanks