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First I'd like to say that you had surprisingly good voice acting, which can be rare nowadays. Second, its really short. I was kind of expecting it to go somewhere and it just suddenly ended (and by ended i mean looped back to the begining again, you should do someting about that) which was kind of disapointing. The animation was average to above average compared to most but was by no means some of the best I have seen.
So to sum things up it was a fairly good flash, but you should have taken it somewhere.
P.S. Not that it influenced your score at all but I don't think that russians dress like that. But i don't really know as I have never been there.