Love it
Even though it only made me chuckle a little, I really loved your art style and your characters expressive faces. Good job, keep it up.
Reviews for "Michelle & Feo Pilot"
Awesome...
It was short, but other than that I have nothing negitive to say about this. Keep it up, I will be watching if you make more.
Probably one of the most well deserved 10's and...
5's ever given to a Newgrounds flash. The animation was excellent, and the writing, while not the greatest, complemented the style very well. It was random at times, but it was the smart kind of random: the kind of random you look at and say "Hey! That was really clever! Ha Ha!"
It reminded me a lot of Ren & Stimpy, and I loved how you never repeated the same drawing twice. Every time you portrayed a character or emotion it was different. You brought out your animation fully and expertly.
I look forward to more from you in the future! Keep doing what you're doing. I think you definitely have a career in animation ahead of you.
very very nice
i can def see this being like a cartoon on nick or something. Only thing to improve on would be the voice actors, Feo didnt seem to match up with the actions, maybe he should have just been a lil louder or something
That was pretty mint
This was actually surprisingly good. I didn't know what to expect from the beginning, the load screen seemed so offbeat, but then the intro started and I knew that this would be gold. This had some very, very good animation. It reminded me very much of the cartoons I used to watch back when I was younger. However, of course, this was more mature, but rightly so and well done. I liked the characters. They seem very attachable, and Feo is pretty damn funny in his own right. The plot of this pilot is good to, as it gives a plot line for the first few episodes or so. Feo reminds me of myself in alot of ways in his forgetfulness and his 'give two shits' attitude. I really liked that about him. In fact, I liked the whole animation on the nostalgic feeling it gave me because of how it's animated. I felt good after watching it as if I wish to relieve some part of my childhood. The only real problem with it that is very noticeable from beginning to end is the voice work. The animation kept this animation from falling below a 9, but it would have definitely gotten a 10 from me had it have had better voice work. The voices were just too low key, and sort of choppy at times, but I like how they are acted. It really gave the characters personality, but I'd really, really love to see those voices done, perhaps, with a better quality microphone or some editing. The voices were really low and I had to turn up my speakers a bit to hear them, and it seems like the voice of Feo was done by someone talking really closely into the microphone. However, they will still nicely executed. The volume needs to be increased on the voices, and I'm sure if that is done that choppiness that occasionally occurs will also dissipate. Despite the voice flaw, though, I enjoyed this flash. A lot. I want to see more of this series and soon!
Rating: 9/10
Score: 5/5