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It was really choppy. You need to lengthen some shots so that we can see them longer and understand whats going on. The music was ok, but it filled the whole animation. You should probably add voices too if you want the dialogue to seem more real and to help improve lip syncing. Thats it.
Thanks for the review sir.
A fun animation
The artwork might have been a bit rushed, but the motion was fluid and believable. You might want to speed up the longer jumps a little bit, or perhaps slow them down for slow motion shots. They didn't work quite as well as the mass combat shots.
The last part, with the two owners/trainers(?) was VERY off, because you didn't change the music. The choice you had for the fight worked well, but the tone you seemed to want for the breakaway was one of conspiracy. Techno just doesn't cut it there.
Looking forward to the next one!
Thank you sir.
O_O
you really made Korak fight with an AWESOME speed man.. (I mean.. I could see what he was doing, and I could understand the movements...)
..that guy rules ...
Oh MAAN.. such a technology, and you make those drawings!?
dude! come on!! try a bit better on the next one, I noticed you worked some time to make it look amazing, but the graphics.. this days won't make it for some ppl...
Lol.. well, IDM graphics, but I know some ppl want smoother drawings
MysticSkillz's Right! it remind me of that game too ^_^
Graphics will get a revamp in the next one. Thanks for the review sir!
wow
Wow man...nice job...u need to add some sound [voices]....
Yeah, once I get a mic and all that Jazz Voices shall be added.
Thanks for the review.
Not Bad
Pretty cool really-interesting name for the monster "Master Tumor" (xD)
Yeah it was an inside joke with some friends, and then I doodles it and thought, hey it looks like a tumour!
Thanks for the review.