Vacuous...
I haven't had a review deleted in a while so I thought I'd stop by to hand out some free whistle points...
First, I must applaud you on successfully implementing the Flash API ads. That was a brilliant move and surely the only reason that this thing exists. I've heard that some people have had a problem getting the ads to work but you seem to have the golden touch. Well done!
However, this is also where your talent begins and ends.
Graphics:
This is FBF at it's most primitive.
Your animation seems to consist of 2 keys and one in-between.
That means that there are a grand total of 3 (!) entire drawings per movement. Considering that the characters don't move very much before cutting to the next shot I'll estimate that the total number of drawings per 20 seconds cartoon must be less that 30.
The manic delivery of the "jokes" also invites, NAY DEMANDS, sloppy lip-syncing.
I think it's safe to assume that, in layman's terms, the animation is shit.
Story:
Okay, it's a parody so a story isn't essential but I can't recall hearing a single joke. And I don't think that violence towards women really counts.
At least you tried?
Sound:
Tomamoto is a great VA but he didn't have much to do here. Still, it was an easy gig for him and I trust you'll be sharing some of the revenue with him?
It would only be fair as he was the one redeeming factor here.
Don't be selfish.
I noticed that the sound effect were created vocally. Er... that was a joke wasn't it?
Don't be put off making cartoons though, this is the only bad review that you'll receive so just breeze through it and laugh at the sheer audacity of it all.
I would be nice to see something original from you one day because these "Awesome" 'toons are becoming tiresome- even some of your fan-base are feeling the formula wane. I suppose this is partly because the success of these things relies on children and the fans are now growing older.
Will a new generation take there place?
And more importantly, will they click on those blasted Flash ads?...