NICE
I guess I was wrong about you and newgrounds. I undetestimated your piece, I must apologize for that. Just look at that, even though your animation isn't as technically sound as mine, you still managed to get a higher score than I did with my alien thing. Good job! Well you already recieved my critique, I don't feel like repeating myself.
LOL!
Great wit - that end line took me totally by surprise. "Whoah! I must've jumped higher than I thought!" LOVED it! :-)
Dude that was awesome
You have got to make the second chapter to this it's a really good work and the story caught on pretty fast
wow
nice drawingssss
I liked it
good job and good work your series has alot of potential keep it up