Huh.
Amusing. But I don't get it.
Five anyway.
Reviews for "Midnight Visit"
Much lulz was had.
This was not the first purple phallic monster to torment me....
What the heck? That was pretty funny, man!
Great job and pretty good concept!
It wasn't perfect, but still, I got a good laugh. That thing looks ridiculous.
I also jumped a bit at the end, which makes me feel like a pansy.
5 outta' 5, 9 outta' 10 and favorited!
Good job!
nice work
cool ng tank poster in BG lol. Also nice how the blood turns into end. Umm length would be nice and maybe a sequel. Scared me there for a sec.
Not bad, not great
The tension you build with the monster, and then just having him give a candybar was pretty nice., but why'd you have to use a name brand bar? Kind of ruined it for me. Would have liked to see something original here.
And speaking of originality, I couldn't help but be reminded of Adam Phillip's flash that has a similar premise and ends exactly like this.
Should try doing something that's a bit more your own.
GoatmanGADs responds:
I was unsure whether or not to use a brand name, in fact I DID make it my own to start with, but then I thought a mrGoodbar was just too funny, I suppose next time I should go with my first intinct, I'm on the same page with you about keeping it original though so thanks for letting me know!