(AND NOW THE CONCLUSION) ...and awesome.
...what was I saying? Oh, yes... but despite all that, I think Graviton is my favorite of the three. He has a quirkiness that you can't help but love... not the "Future Smello joke-every-ten-seconds" quirk, but the fact that he can make you BELIEVE he has such great powers. Awesome Force, you've done it again... but for the first time... I, uh... um...
...I'll stop now.
...just a kid!
It's really great how you've managed to 'get' all the characters, their powers and their personalities. I'm impressed!
youe
i think you are the nexte newground star
iam pretty sure :DDD
Pretty amusing ^_^
I find ironically pointless plot lines to be particularly amusing >_<
So, naturally when a group of 'super' heroes that are generally ineffective group up together to fight even more ineffective bad guy(s?) to stop a plot that isn't going to work in the first place... It results in two things, me enjoying myself, and the main characters having delusions of significance (which is also amusing)
Good job overall, hope to see more of this sometime, somewhere, and hope you can win that contest
Haha, you seem to have the entire plot and premise pegged in one! Well done!
And you still enjoyed it, which is great.
Oh no what is that smell!
It smells like vomit, ehrg it's disgusting, I think I'm going to *vomits*
Lol! Loved that joke. Also how present-smello wanted to take over the world was hilarious.
You're the first person to quote that line correctly! ;P
Haha cheers. Present Smello is a bit of a maniac, but he's a douche maniac, so it's okay.
This was funny.
I laughed. Alot. 10/10.