Reviews for THE CROSS pt.1 of 2

[loopyjuice]

?????

there is no truth to who created us the reason for this is that man only created a god and or gods to not feel alone in the vast universe we call home and the reason im typing this is is for the purpose to tell all that life is but a dream an the afterlife is waiting for us to wake up to begin the greater journey ahead of us all these religions are nothing but lies told to us to keep us in line everything you know is all but a lie death is our true awakening and is awaiting us all to embrace it

nahtanojmal responds:

If life is a dream, what is wrong with me believing God made the world. Can't anything happen in a dream? If everything I think and believe is wrong, it wouldn't matter (according to your belief), because death is the beginning of a greater journey.

If we are all kept in line, what does that matter in this life if the greater journey is after death.

But if God is real and yes indeed the next life is the more real. God's wrath will be upon all who rejected Him. May God's wrath awaken you and God's love convert you.

[blank0000]

Great re-telling

Our religious views differ, but your rendition of said story is very well done, and I prefer it to a lot of other forms I've heard it in.

[SerraStryke]

thanks

it's good to be reminded again.

and I agree with SpikeValentine, it is a good topic to have slowed it down. but still good.

[maxiixam]

brilliant

keep em coming!!

[SpikeVallentine]

duuude

why did you make it go so fast?

This is sensetive content, please "slow it down" man.

I believe in this stuff and agree with everything, but even me, I couldn't really keep up with it. (in general i aint even saying im a genuis or fast reader. but in general, imagine those who are slower than me and are hearing it for the first time.)

please dude...slow it down. i was a bit annoyed how fast it went. cause its like, "do you care for us to hear/see what you made?" it doesnt seem like it.

so i guess.......your future projects...i guess...moderation? dont make things too quick and of course not too slow.