funny
hehe reminds me of me and my friends but we all moved out of me and my friends i was more like rat....a..anyway it was very good i want u too keep trying more and dont give up ur vid. was funny
Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1"
lol worthy
good animation and style.
reminded me alot of my friends, can't wait for epis 2
Meh...
The animation was smooth, and the storyline was consistent, but to be honest, it felt like either, I was missing some pivotal part of the story (I.E. actually knowing the people this is based on) Or I just don't find it relevant anymore, To be honest this feels like the kind of thing a nerdy could would make when there about to be beaten up by the big ol' mean school bully.
All in all Mediocre, atleast from the POV of a 20 something year old college student.
:D!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought that was really good.
The ending was awesome, too, and I'm glad it wasn't like some episodes where animators make, like, ONE scene the entire episode, which is damn infuriating.
There were parts where I felt really bored, or like 'what the fuck am I watching', like when Scooter is talking about the tearing up and punching someone in the face. It really took away from the story.
Think of it as if you're reading the story. If I had to sit and read that, I would get really bored, and easily distracted, and probably go somewhere else. Also, the fact that the shot was above the jet pool(-thing. Whatever, it's late, I can't think) and nothing was happening, I really had to force myself to sit to wait and see what would happen at the end.
Just a suggestion for future reference. Too much outside reasoning or explanation can make for dry dialogue.
The beginning also seemed more life-like than what I've seen. I agree with the guy below me, Fishes, who said that this seemed more like real high school then what you get on tv, and it did. Except for the whole jerking off part. Personally I've never (had proof/) seen a guy do this, but (I'm sure) it happens.
Other than that, keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to what you next turn out with.
Cheers!!!!!!!! :D
Definitely NOT boring.
It's pretty damn funny and some nice animation to boot. Can't wait for Epis. 2.