"No, no. That's okay. I've got it."
This brightened my already fun-filled day.
Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1"
"SUPRISE!!!"
Haha, that was funny. Keep it up guys!!!
thats is the surprise!
that surprise is da best :D I will show that surprise to my friends :D
:D!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought that was really good.
The ending was awesome, too, and I'm glad it wasn't like some episodes where animators make, like, ONE scene the entire episode, which is damn infuriating.
There were parts where I felt really bored, or like 'what the fuck am I watching', like when Scooter is talking about the tearing up and punching someone in the face. It really took away from the story.
Think of it as if you're reading the story. If I had to sit and read that, I would get really bored, and easily distracted, and probably go somewhere else. Also, the fact that the shot was above the jet pool(-thing. Whatever, it's late, I can't think) and nothing was happening, I really had to force myself to sit to wait and see what would happen at the end.
Just a suggestion for future reference. Too much outside reasoning or explanation can make for dry dialogue.
The beginning also seemed more life-like than what I've seen. I agree with the guy below me, Fishes, who said that this seemed more like real high school then what you get on tv, and it did. Except for the whole jerking off part. Personally I've never (had proof/) seen a guy do this, but (I'm sure) it happens.
Other than that, keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to what you next turn out with.
Cheers!!!!!!!! :D
Hmh..
I like it. Make more. Please.
... I would like to say more, but I am german... and my vocabulary is well, but not well enough to give you the credit (?) that you deserved. :)
Greetings
Guywholikeshalloween