I like the part when
I like the part when I scream and fall over. Do you know how many screams I had to.... scream. They all sounded dumb and then I just did that one and I was like YAY!
Reviews for "SPRITES!-Episode2"
Yes General...
Its certainly better than the first one, and I can see that you've put a lot of time and effort in it.. General. Next time General, maybe have some higher res sprites, it did get a bit boring looking at blocks all the time, I can see that you have talent and i'm sure you'll find a way to make it work better :)
Anyway General, Have a nice day General, and looking forward to the next one..
.. General!
Well............
The animation was top notch, there's no denying that. Visually, this video was very impressive. However having said that, the writing was atrocious. Some of the dialogue made me want to rip my ears off, I'm sorry to say. Maybe it's because I'm not particularly fond of cheesy fan-fiction or fan-fiction at all for that matter and this is about as cheesy as fan-fiction gets without getting into the Adult Only stuff. I just think you're mashing too many fictional worlds together. ...not that you can't make it work mind you. If you're going to continue this, I'd recommend taking a little more care when writing the characters dialogue, and maybe watching that your evil empire isn't to cartoonishly evil. ...unless that's the effect you're going for.
i can understand graphics are hard to do
but dialog and orginal characters is not your strong suit