well
the jokes were pretty stupid and the most things in it seemed to come of as annoying. BUT some the animation was pretty good and a few of the gags had some
"comedy value"lso a second one could be interesting (but only if it makes any sense)
6/10
Okay, but it would have been more helpful if you told me which parts you didn't like.
One could complain this is senselessly shameful...
Yet, I was impressed. I got a huge laugh over the Jerry Seinfeld chorus line in the chase seen. You seem to understand parody and are pretty good at it too. I loved the motor-sicle and the pant's battle.
Haha, thank you. The motorcicle idea actually emerged when we were writing the script and my friend purposely misspelled "motorcycle." But we stuck with it because we found it to be pretty funny.
I FUCKING LOVE IT
I ULTRA FUCKING SHIT DAMNIT LOVE IT SO MUCH
That's nice.
it was okay
I think some of this was kinda stupid to be honest. The animation was cheesy but in a good way I guess. Some of the sounds were a bit loud but that didn't really bother me too much. I think you got some talent just hone in on it.
3/5
Alright, thanks! I must admit, I am ashamed of a lot of the animation in this and I hope to improve it.
In the long run, this whole thing was supposed to have a cheesy look to it.
It was okay
If anything I give it a 4 because of the awful sound, I had to turn the sound down to just make it bearable.
Animation was okay but the jokes were mediocre at best, although I admit I did laugh with the product placement Apple logo bit( DAMN U TRANSFORMERS)
I'll have to look into the sound issue that you are talking about, it didn't seem that loud to me.