It had its moments
The art and voicing was very well done, and there were moments in the video that were very funny. As a first episode, I'm assuming this will get better since most series tend to transcend the pilot. As such, I'm putting my faith in to it with an eight, and hope the next one has a bit better writing.
very good. bit like robot chicken / ADD skit.
great for someone like me with a bad attention sp
The art...
...Was very good, and the audio was very clear. The writing not so much. When the boy got hit from one side and then the other by a baseball I expected the skit to end with some clever explanation as to why his sandbox seems to be surrounded on all sides by baseball fields or why his parents liked to circle him and throw 90 mph pitches at his head, but it never came. The bear poking bits made no real sense as there wasn't any reason for any of them to poke the bear, they just had a deathwish or something. Ironically, someone intentionally throwing themselves on an upturned sword would have been funnier and still made just as much sense. Though the bear was drawn really well, I will say that. The puns are kind of "smile humor" in the sense that they bring about a smile because I can tell where you're going with it, but none of them were really all that funny. On an unrelated note, I see that one member of your father/son team is only a decade older than the other. I'm impressed.
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!
<<I JUST CANT QUITE YOU!>>
Ehh..
Wasn't as sick and adult as I wanted it..
Still great job, awesome animations.
Keep it up.