I would love to see part 2. But I agree with Ahkihoun. The animation is a little choppy and I'm pretty sure you could fix it in part 2 but overall great storyline!
Reviews for "Luminiscense"
This was really good. The color, the backgrounds, the character just everything. The only thing that REALLY bothered me and kept jarring me from being completly immersed in your story was your choppy animation. It was great for the most part, but maybe smoothing it out would be good- your backgrounds are so beautiful that when you have animations on top of them they just dont mesh as well. You seem to be more of an illustrator than animator- but who am I to judge? This was still an amazing piece of art and I can't wait to watch what happens next. Great work!
Great choice of colors and musics, really heartfelt. Maybe i'd put a little more attention on balancing the voice dubs with background music and effects. But overall... aw, so fragile... T.T
I cried when he woke up and it looked as if she died....
I haven't watched the second part because it says to be continued so im just hoping she didn't actually die...
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catalin66
2 weeks ago
OO Why would you do something like that? This is one of the many seen that I wish to turn into movies. Now for criticism. Even nazi's don't bomb open fields. You should put them into a city or something.
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Because the point of the story isin't that Nazy throw bomb and are bad people QQ
This is just a theme to explain how fragile things we love and remember can be destroyed fast and easily.
5/5 This story was pure awesomenesse. I know its been more than a year and half since it was uploaded but I hope to see more of this soon.