Perfect
There really isn't anything bad I can say about this piece, it's flawless.
Reviews for "MoGro Promo"
I LOVED THIS IT IS AWESOME
there is noting i can say that is bad about this it was done beautifully
This is difficult...
On one hand I completely disagree with the message/pitch/product, on the other hand I can see the technical merit and flawless execution of the commercial.
Your use of basic geometric patterns to form different characters/object/creatures was skillfully done in that I understood what everything was supposed to be.
Your use of the colour blue to reinforce the company theme was intelligent, and done in a way that strikes a salient image, and leaves an impression.
The audio, and music selection were all perfect, so no complaints there.
The tweening while flawless is something that I always feel the need to take a star off. While you did an excellent job, in comparison with other submissions that use traditional frame by frame animation I feel it would be inappropriate to give something tweened a perfect score in the animation compartment. I can however empathize if you needed to use tweening to meet a deadline.
That now only leaves the content itself to critique, the idea of easy money is something I've always found terribly pernicious. While your commercial was clever and well written I don't feel it offered any concept of the risk involved in these type of ventures, and while I do believe the onus is on the consumer to look up risks involved in any type of investment, the website itself wasn't very informative.
From what I understand it's an investment software that's supposed to "simplify investing", that's an ostentatious thing to offer because investing in the stock market is like trying to figure out an complex esoteric formula akin to "chaos theory", a product like this can't possibly be useful due to the capricious nature of the stock market.
In a recession brought on by the stock market, and driven by an insatiable lust for greed and an easy dollar, a company offering a Machiavellian product like this seems unethical to me.
Regardless you did a great job, and I wish you the best with your other projects.
Sincerely,
- Celx
amazing
i have to give this a 10!
This is what i find to be simple yet entertaining flash for all ages, its clean and funny, and even shows a good practice of math. I personally would really like to more clean and entertaining flash media like this! ^___^
5/5
very great
i like it