Friday?
Legit thought this was a parody of Friday by Rebecca Black. 7 am waking up? Looks like her? hmmmmmm.....
Reviews for "Mouthless"
Nice
It was interesting. I enjoyed the music and some parts where kinda funny. This would be ten times better with better animation though.
Amazing work
You may not be satisfied with quality of your work, but I assure you that it's great. Original history, great music! Good job, Keep it up!
Good
The animation quality is good and all parts of the animation are fairly smooth. There is room for improvement, though. The few instances of "text tool" text seemed out of place. Drawing it in manually would allow it to fit in better with the animation considering it follows a "sketchy" art style.
The scene where the protagonist is unsure of what to do about the explosive is a bit jumpy. It could have been animated more smoothly. The scene where the man is sitting in the doorway ends oddly and a different transition of him fading away could have been used.
The audio was fitting and went along with the action well. At the end, the sound quality could have been improved by using a better microphone. The audio becomes distorted at the end.
The sketchy style of it is good and it definitely works well for such a fast-paced animation. This flash managed to stay interesting by constantly shifting focus to different obstacles for the protagonist to overcome.
I liked it
The animation may not be to your liking but it had an energetic feel to it because of shifting lines, which I think worked with the music. Wierd but I had no problem watching it. Keep it up :)