My one criticism:
Circle-tool pool of blood. Next time just shape-tween between two hand drawn puddles, so even if it's a simple as fuck shape, it'll look more organic.
That's seriously my only criticism. There's not another thing here I would've done differently. The cuts back and forth to the Youtube-Commenter's gargling were timed beautifully, and over all I found this inspiring and great to look at.
Stop making me love you, Hadel. <3
Usually when I do blood, I do a movieclip and blur it so it looks alright. However, I couldn't do that this time because when I export in After Effects, it doesn't display MovieClips at all. I'll start doing it that way from now on.
Also I will never stop making you love me.
Good movie
This was absolutely hilarious. The end was a bit too foreseeability but otherwise awesome work. Keep it up.
Very good, BUT
"then I took an arrow IN the knee" is the correct phrase.
The last sentence
is the funniest sentence I have ever seen.
True
Very true.
Art is very cleanly-drawn and pretty lifelike. Voice-acting is good as well. Animation is also good. It's just kind of short, unfortunately.