short, choppy animation, pretty bad art, crappy sound quality, low overall effect
Might want to work on improving your art, getting better sounds to match your animation, making bigger projects, and having a story that sucks people in.
Reviews for "food: a papermation"
Horsenwelles responds:
i've done that already. i wrote a joke and your the very first and only person to truly find disgust with it.
as for a story, i SAID it was just a dumb joke. why did you expect a flowing narrative from this?
Crazy made, smashed up together in a weird story about apples. The drawings are decent, and how smooth the animation feels makes it really show off the work without ruining the whole animation feel to it. I liked it, wish you could have made it longer though or have an actual plot next time.
Horsenwelles responds:
ik, but i had fun with this singular joke, and i really couldn't deal with my computer's limitations =(
haha, very funny
Horsenwelles responds:
its informative. it never had a joke ever
great animation a lil short but still quite entertaining and funny :)
Horsenwelles responds:
why thanky!
This was pretty good one of those animations that actually makes you laugh out loud. Great work I hope to see more of these on the main page.
Horsenwelles responds:
wow, thank you! i guess i entertained some people for once! =D