Amazing animation, okay dialogue, but where's the story? I'm definitely no english-teacher, but I genuinely feel that it was missing character/plot developement (and maybe some sort of explanation to who these people(?) are, how come they've got these dragonballs-powers, and why "HQ" sent them to go fetch this insanely "dangerous" meteoriteâEU¦)
To me it felt like just another random fight animation, although there was an attempt at a story, and the animation was of a much better quality.
Only reason DragonBalls was watchable was because the characters had some sort of background story, and they had a somewhat clear goal. This was like taking that, and editing out everything but the fight scene between some colourfully-dressed characters and a character dressed in black: More plot!
Reviews for "ECLIPSE FORCE"
The lack of story has actually been a consistent criticism since I started storyboarding it. Alas, I only had x amount of time to get all the fight I wanted, and since I was dying to do an action cartoon, I let the story sit back on this one. I am going to to keep this feedback in mind if I (HOPEFULLY :D) go back to Eclipse Force. Thanks for reviewing!
We all missed you Chakra :)
this had a slow start, but could be an awesome series
5 out of 5 mate. lol. i just wanted to toutch your ass. lmao
Haha People crack me up when they review. This flash was one of the best ive seen in a while, it had cheesy moments but who gives a f**k. It was entertaining, imaganitve, and you actually pulled off some funny jokes without using 1,000 awkward looking faces. The only criticism I could say is probably the cheesy lines and the voice acting was a little off but it definitely didn't ruin it. Keep it up.
By The Way: Most of the people that gave your flash a crappy score without giving you a well detailed reason are probably the same people that are keeping Sonic: Too Fast on the front page.