Amazing!!!!!!!!!
I've been waiting a long time to see this!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait to see what's revealed in part 2.
(Like what's up with the photo? Did Karissa have a sister before her family moved?)
Reviews for "Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.1"
Interesting.
This is intriguing and disturbing at the same time. I like it. Ima favourite you and keep an eye out for updates. Well done on the smooth animation, great sound and voice acting cast and overall ambiance. Well earned stars my friend!
WTF in first part Shon was a dick and he dosn't want to hang out with Karisa becouse she was cursed. :O Is it a prequel to the story? Steel amazing. I know my english is horible. You know I'm from Poland and I'm drunk as fuck :*
TheFabs responds:
I intended for that VERY first episode to just be an experimental entry into the series I wanted to make. I had never done flash before, but I really wanted to make this story I wrote forever ago called 'An Unfortunate Girl' a visual thing, so I tried it out. The whole first ep thing is basically me trying to be WEIRRDDD and SPOOOOKY and doing it badly, BUT with that being said, it does still fit into the story, just in another realm I suppose, because that whole episode is a nightmare built from her fears and anxieties. Shawn is a dick in that episode because that's what SHE fears. She doesn't want her only friend to turn on her. Now that I have improved a bit with storytelling and animation, I can actually try to build the actual characters as I intended them to be instead of taking the easy way out and making everything IN YOUR FACE WEIRD/SCARY like the first episode. Both the episodes before this make me cringe and sorta laugh at my skill levels at the time, BUT I suppose they both contribute to the story so I keep them up for all to see! Hope this helps.
Why not make a preface?
MORE! <3 THIS