The artwork is really, really good and the length of the game is also just fine. But the story just doesn't make any sense. I didn't know why the old ladies were doing whatever they were doing in the game. And the scrolling made my head spin. Also, while the puzzles were fun, I needed the walkthrough in some areas, again because I had no idea what I was supposed to be doing. Some direction is required as far as the story is concerned, and an option for scrolling vide arrows would be helpful. Great potential though. Keep working on it :)