I have only one thing to say... MOAR PLZ! ^.^
Reviews for "Dead Detention #4.5"
Wow just wow!!
Creative brain storming. :) It keeps switching from random and fun to serious and somber, this series. A good segment of the saga! Nice work.
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I love interactive stories (I published a few myself here on NG), even more if they're in comics form and so, of course, I enjoyed this one!
Both the drawings and the musics are good, too, and that helped. And mini-games were fun.
I have a suggestion, though: failing the mini-game will simply make you "die" and restart.. how about you put different dialogues and/or outcomes depending on the results of the mini-games? Of course, that would mean a bit of extra work on your part, but I feel like that'd make the story go to another level.
That said, this was a quick and fun experience. Keep up the good work!
Not much new to say, so, i'll stick with my previous reviews about your series and say it was good and all, but it still has room for improvement