Well, it's pretty good...I have to admit the bit about the, er, Moffat-esque "young people in love"...it's just a little creepy, you know? The other thing is, there isn't much motivation for the character to NOT choose Rizette. I mean, she asks you to the park after school and...what reason do you have to not go talk to her? Especially after the character spends so much time saying he loves her.
Anyway, you actually completed and published a game, which is more than most other people do, so that's good. ;)