Dude this looks really good keep up the work
Reviews for "THE WISH - Prologue"
Wondermeow responds:
Thanks mate ^^
Heh,
You got a good setup there.
Hope to see more of this series.
Everything was pretty sweet, but I have one nitpick. Why do the coins need an abbreviation? Couldn't you just say "coins" instead of putting the EM in front every time? Saying "EM coins" sounded goofy, and personally pulled me out of the otherwise solid immersion.
Cool stuff, thanks for the vid!
Wondermeow responds:
Lol, i guess everyone has there different opinions thank you for watching and your feedback.
Kind regards,
Wondermeow
That ending! I can't stop laughing!
Alright, in all seriousness, it looks good. My only nitpick is your abbreviation of 'Mana Element'. By using EM as the abbreviation, others may mistake for something similar. While typing this, I had to go back to see if EM stood for Elemental Mana or Magic.
Also, what do the colors stand for, different elements? I get red for fire, blue water, green nature or something of the like. But what about white and black. White, may be holy or something similar, but what about black? Or are you planning to tell us in a later episiode/video?
Wondermeow responds:
Thank you for your feedback its nice to see someone who is curious but yes everything will be shown and explained over future episodes.
Kind regards,
Wondermeow
Very well made! Your cartoon models keep getting better and better! Though, I'll still take off one star for the somewhat jittery animation, it's not distracting but it's not quite unnoticeable, either. May I suggest drawling more in-betweens? Moreover, the font used in the animation is definitely out of place, but this is just a simple nit-pick of mine. Overall, a pretty good pilot episode, but my main gripe with it is the somewhat choppy animation; clean up the animation a little and this would've been a sure 5-stars from me :)
-Bow