Remember Genryu's Blade? This cartoon was THAT without the build up.... It needs the build up, even if IF IT IS a matrix inspired mock off. Even if this piece had a background story... why give a shit? It's all the same shit we've seen before......................I still give you a four because I'm sure it took a lot of effort,
Reviews for "Godians Fight"
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so this is pretty awesome and I really love how sharp and flowing the animation is it really works well and the artwork is even better and I couldnt find anything that would need changing just keep doing what you do best
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Pretty good animation work, i like.
The score somehow feels a bit flat, with the large locale, like it needs something that really 'lifts the roof' to properly embody the fight, and the locale itself is a bit gray and lifeless, but the fight. Woah, man, so awesome. Fluid, ferocious, and well-coreographed too. Just wish the surrounding elements played into it as well, or that the characters stood out from their background, maybe with white suits? Or other colors? It's an amazing fight, but to make it as visually appealing as possible it feels it needs some highlight. Great work!
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Smyton4tw responds:
I really appreciate your in depth critique! I have to agree on the background. If I had to redo it, I'd make them fight outside while it's sunny.